After Finding out my initial research and defining my "What is Good?" I had to pitch my concept about how I was going to Package and Promote Overhearing to my fellow peers and tutors. The crit was fantastic, my idea was highly thought of and it seemed from the feedback inspite of a nervy introduction my concept was clear and without being too cliche "Good".
There were several things that were commented on:
1. Encourage conversation? or Promote Overhearing?
The message I was trying to communicate was slightly confusing, some thought that I was trying to communicate conversation by means of quotations on media and such. The way I intend for this proposal to work is indirect. The quotes themselves are taken from overhearings, the way it promotes is though creating conversation and a talking point, which fuels indirectly overhearing, which creates a continuous cycle.
2. Stock Choice?
I've been thinking something in an eco material, ideally with a rough kind of grain to it. But having now settled with a client for this brief I would like their input aswell.
3. Content - Will the content be generic? Is the content appropriate for the target audience?
The content of the quotes is not fueled by myself, it comes directly from the audience, it is in effect/or should be a content that is appropriate for the audience. I have had thoughts about how I could change the visuals monthly much like a retail shop would, this would help as it keeps the coffee house up-to date, which could be more enticing for the customers having a change of visuals when they come in. Alternatively I could just create generic visuals that can be used all year round, not specificaly related to any seasonal events such as the x-factor.
4. Cost?
I intend to look at how much material consumption a coffee house takes by using my client and from there I can work out pricing. I also would like to talk to justin burns and the enterprise and innovation expert Bridget about how much I should charge for my time.
5. Subtlety - Do you want people to notice the content straight away?
Yes, these quotations are not only part of the visual brand but essentially need to stand out in order to create conversation to which overhearing can take place. Having them in a subtle manner would mean they are not seen, being subtle would be more in the way of the eavesdropping which is about looking with intent for something which is not what I am trying to achieve.
There were also a couple of comments about the media I was going to use, printed napkins and cupholders were particular favourites but what was also mentioned about heat sensitive inks and how if they were used on stirrers they could react to hot drinks to reveal messages. Overall it was a very constructive and supportive crit.
In terms of how the project has evolved, I gave in my presentation a run down of how I got to where I am at the minute. First the generic lists and spider diagrams of which allowed me to indentify a particular subject matter, in both groups and by myself.
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